Admission Essay

<p>Hello, I just finished my Admissions Essay for GS and I was wondering if anybody can take a look at it for me. </p>

<p>I recently visited Columbia on one of the campus tours and absolutely fell in love with the school and the city. I also took the GSAE during my visit. To give you some information about me I am a 25 year old veteran who has been going to a community college in California for the past 2 years. I had horrible grades before I joined but I have been getting straight "A"s ever since I started going back to school. My current overall GPA is a 3.4</p>

<p>Any input will be appreciated!</p>

<p>not sure i can help with the essay, but i would love to hear about your campus visit? what was it like? what were the people like? was the session informative?</p>

<p>The campus visit was pretty standard, didn't get much out of it other than where all the buildings on campus were and the history behind them. But, I was really impressed by the people I met there. Everyone seemed like they had an amazing story before they came to Columbia. Also not only did they have a good story they were very well spoken. I think the people I met at GS was what really did it for me. Hope my answer helps. :)</p>

<p>I'll be glad to take a look. I'm planning to work on mine sometime next week. Maybe you can review mine then also! =)</p>