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<p>Hi! I’m wondering what the last sentence of your Why Penn essay is. I want to make sure my ending is strong since it is my last chance to convince the reader that this school is all I want right now.</p>

<p>The power of the last sentence really depends on the rest of your essay. In other words, a really powerful last sentence won’t save a below average essay.</p>

<p>“And that’s why I want to attend Harvard University.”</p>

<p>thanks guys. God bless! anyone else?</p>

<p>“And that’s why I want to attend Columbia University.”</p>

<p>“And that’s why I don’t want to attend uPenn” ■■■■■ face</p>

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<p>“And that’s why I want to attend Penn State”</p>

<p>“And that’s why I want to attend Whart-on your foot”</p>

<p>“And that’s why I want to attend the University of Pennisylvania”</p>

<p>“And that’s why I want to attend the Correge of Arts and Crafts in the University of Pennsyrvania”</p>

<p>Penn State jokes? too soon too soon</p>