<p>I’m a sophomore currently, and I plan have a future in psychology. For my common application essay I plan on writing about an exboyfriend who is suffering from depression, and how it helped me find my interest in psychology. Is this a good topic for a common application, or should I choose another topic?</p>
<p>And also, I wrote my introduction, but I have no idea how to move on to my body so that it flows nicely. Any tips/ideas for me?</p>
<p>I’ll repost the advice I gave in another thread here, because I think it would apply to you as well - good topic, if done right:</p>
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You actually have the makings of a great essay… if done right. The main ingredient is - like a movie - character development: you changing to a stronger or better or more knowledgeable YOU. So your essay will have the following structure:</p>
<p>First paragraph: a jump right into a “pre-changed you” - a “scene” if you will SHOWING what is happening. For example, the first day of class. Did you think it was going to be stupid? Boring? A waste? Describe, don’t just tell your feelings.</p>
<p>Think back. Was there a memorable moment that started your transition? Put the reader in that moment. Don’t be afraid to show your flaw or issue. Growing from that will be the HEART of your essay.</p>
<p>Then think of the last paragraph. The will be a scene that shows how you’ve changed. What can illustrate that?</p>
<p>Only after you have your first and last paragraphs do you then fill in the “in-between” - two or so paragraphs showing increments of the change.</p>
<p>Take a look at this essay in light of what I said above:</p>
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<p>Also note the little “stinger” on the end… those few words make this a MUCH more memorable essay,
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<p>Great, thanks for the help!</p>