<p>Would it be okay to place the focus on dance and the Yale-in-London program instead of academics when answering this question? I feel that if I focus on academics, I’d be too cliche. I dance hip-hop and there’s a specific dance group at Yale I came across and they’re really awesome, I’ve been watching videos from their youtube channel.</p>
<p>And also would anyone like to give feedback on mine please?</p>
<p>I’ll find non-generic information about the school that correlates to your career choice.
You could even map out your plan for the future and how Yale participates in this. Make sure you tell them what you offer to the school and also what they can/will do for you.</p>
<p>I think that’s okay, it’d be a more unique reason to accept you into their school. Be sure to mention other reasons that interest you, too, though</p>