<p>The experience I will be writing about is raising a child (not by myself, but i have been a big part) since the start of my high school career. i was wondering: would be okay to do the introduction with the actual moment I met the baby, writing about how i felt, thoughts, etc.? i know i should be direct with introducing the experience itself but i think it would flow better if i write an anecdote in the intro then go on to what i’m proud of achieving, what the exp. says about me, challenges, etc. my only concern is that the anecdote is seen as a filler, which is not my intention.
please give me your opinions and suggestions!</p>
<p>sup lance
i still gotta do that prompt >.<</p>
<p>I have no qualifications in this but I would say have the 1st para be about how you felt and all, in your (dont want to use this word but:)thesis link this to what this means about you etc.</p>