Ahh need help with Why Penn intro

Colleges & Universities University of Pennsylvania
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<p>anyone willing to read my intro and see if you can make it flow better (if needs be)?</p>

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<p>sure.</p>

<p>e-mail it at:
<a href="mailto:raghav.purNOSPAManmalka@gmail.com">raghav.purNOSPAManmalka@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>yeah, PM it to me</p>