Alzheimer's Benefit Essay; How does it look?

College Essays
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<p>Yet another “read my essay” thread! I hate to clutter this forum even further, but I feel as if I’ll get a bit more attention in regards to my writing.</p>

<p>If you’d like to take a look, let me know. Also, if possible, indicate your age and targeted schools. It’s just for the sake of security!</p>

<p>My intended applications: Northwestern, Boston College, Boston University, George Washington, William and Mary, Michigan,and Notre Dame.</p>

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<p>The swarm of people interested is overwhelming. Slow down, guys!</p>

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<p>Still looking for some help…</p>

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<p>Hey I’ll read it, it just might take me a day or two to get back to you sorry</p>