America vs. Myself (Do I need a diffrent title?)

College Essays
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<p>Anyone willing to read my college essay and give me some suggestions to improve my essay? ESSAY BY PM ONLY!</p>

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<p>Okay, send it to me.</p>

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<p>Sure I’ll take a look at it.</p>

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<p>pm it
i am college class 2013</p>