An essay about a poor education system

College Essays
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<p>The essay I’m writing will be for the first UC prompt (describe the world, how has it affected you). What I’m wondering is if writing about uninspiring teachers and corrupted students would be an appropriate subject for “the world.” </p>

<p>I actually have finished writing it, but I don’t feel that it’s particularly strong or personal. Would anyone be so nice as to give it a read (PM)?</p>

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<p>Sounds interesting. I’ll read it if you want.</p>

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<p>I would love to read it. Sounds very interesting to me.</p>