An Essay about Grapes and Raisins

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys, I think I have an almost-finished essay draft for the CommonAPP
I would be forever grateful if you could give me any type of feedback, even just on the first paragraph. PM if you would like to read it. Thanks so much!!</p>

<p>p.s. its about grapes and raisins if that sparks your interest</p>

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<p>hey! i would def.like to read it and giv u feedback</p>

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<p>I’ll give a sentence or two of feedback. And I feel it’s my duty to let you know that I am a senior. So if you don’t send it it’s fine.</p>

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<p>ok thanks so much!! please be as rash and critical as you want…thats what I need!</p>