An essay about science

College Essays
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<p>If I may…</p>

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<p>The idea in your essay is very good. The major problem is that you are too general in developing your idea. Thus the essay lacks a theme. You have to concentrate on one incident that teaches you and influences the way how you look at the science subjects and improve your research capabilities.</p>

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