<p>i want to know what my essay would say to someone who has never met me (which would be you). PM please!</p>
<p>Glad to help you. Email me.</p>
<p>You have an impressive talent in telling stories. All you have to do is to tighten the essay up, or refine the paragraphs except the last one which is excellently stated and a powerful ending. Do you have a limit on words ?</p>
<p>I would like to read it, einnoc!!! PM me</p>
<p>If it’s not a problem, I’d be happy to review it.</p>
<p>i’d like to critique it, pm it to me.</p>