<p>Could someone please read my common app essay? </p>
<p>I’m a little worried because it is more formal than the majority of college essays.</p>
<p>I do but I’m also applying to college now.</p>
<p>I’m also applying to Oberlin :(</p>
<p>I’m getting desperate… </p>
<p>I don’t have anyone from the US who could give me feedback, but Europeans have a different approach to these essays.</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>
<p>I can look at it too. I’m a 2014er, but I’ve already submitted all my commapp schools; I just need to finish MIT, UMaryland, and UNC at this point.</p>
<p>I can read it to! I finally finished all my apps!!!</p>