An Essay On Personal Perspective? - Needs Major Help!

<p>Hey Community,</p>

<p>I am been working on an essay about a personal perspective from my life, and it needs some major help.
I don't think if I'm hitting the prompt hard enough? Is the language good? Is my message intact? </p>

<p>Let me know if you can take a look at it.
I will only be sending this out to high number posters!
Sorry others! </p>

<p>Thanks a lot guys!
Take care! </p>