<p>So this is my essay about “an experience that forced me to question a previously held opinion” … how volunteering at a women’s shelter changed my opinions on people living in poverty.
It needs a lot of help so anything would be very much appreciated!
Thanks</p>
<p>maybe i should also mention it is not an essay, but “short answer” (as it appears on their app.) “in at least 250 words”… mine is at 392.</p>
<p>pretty please?</p>
<p>is this for the common app bc that essay is not a short answer, but a full blown essay</p>
<p>nope it’s for a small women’s college… it’s their “premier” application, no app fee, no real essay. it’s not my #1 choice, but i’d still like the essay to be well presented.</p>
<p>ill read it</p>