<p>Ok, I think I got it.</p>
<p>-Too much background
-Get to the point
-Better organization</p>
<p>I would also like to know if anyone could give any examples that would fit the prompt better. I was stuck on this prompt for the first 5 minutes trying to think of examples from history, literature, or pop culture so I decided the only thing I could do was support the entire thing with an anecdote.</p>