<p>Pretty decent but not focused enough and you only gave 1 example and well it wasnt very convincing to the reader only because the prompt said Are we free to make our own decisions or are we limited in the choices we can make? and you showed me that Through Abby’s tale, it became clear what she did in high school - activities and academics - would dictate her choice of college. It’s kinda eh you know?
3-5?</p>