Any Generous Readers Out There?

<p>I was wondering if anyone could take a look at my Common App essay. I know that there’s something wrong with it. I can’t quite figure out what exactly IS up with it though, or how to fix it, so I’ll settle for just knowing the problem.</p>

<p>Thanks if you decide to take the time to read and thanks for just checking my post.</p>

<p>I am happy to take a stab at diagnosing your essay. </p>

<p>I’m happy to read as well…</p>