Any kind parents willing to look over a prospective Brown student's essay?

<p>Here is the prompt, I took a unique approach and need some harsh criticism…thanks!</p>

<p>Sculptor Jacques Lipchitz once said, “Cubism is like standing at a certain point on a mountain and looking around. If you go higher, things will look different; if you go lower, again they will look different. It is a point of view.” With this in mind, describe a moment when your perspective changed.</p>