Any parents willing to a lowly senior critique/revise his essay?

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<p>I’ve asked some other HS students for help, but I think you adults could do a better job. This essay is for my dream college and I’m thinking it might be a miserable flop.</p>

<p>Edit: title Any parents willing to help a lowly senior critique/revise his essay?</p>

<p>as you can see, I need help. Haha</p>

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<p>You’d be better off posting in the forum of your perspective school.</p>

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<p>Duper, I have a little extra time this week, so you may send it to me by PM or email. (I actually prefer email.) Please let me know which college it is for.</p>