any reviewers for a RISKY essay?

<p>Parents i would greatly appreciate it if you would read over my essay. I'm worried that it could be read as unpatriotic. .. Its is not a Bush rant i promise, it doesnt even talk about modern politics... its simply different, perhaps overly idealistic and naiive. More importantly if you can't wade through it tell me so I can try and spice it up. PM me if interested in helping a nervous wreck of a high school senior.</p>

<p>Feel free to PM it to me, along with your email address.</p>

<p>im not a parent, but i still want to read it!!!!!</p>