any takers on reviewing my essay?

<p>Summary:</p>

<p>is about a writing contest i got 2nd place on when i was in 6th grade. it starts off as a misconception about essays, delves into me in the process on writing the essay. goes into the psychological aspect, deep into my mind, and how i wrote it, analyzing every curve, (yes i also write in cursive) anyways…then it goes into me winning 2nd place, and the intense imagery of walking up to the stage…how the people mocked my seriousness into the competition…essays importance to me…epiphany –> realizing the essay depicted my interest in biology…and ends off with the essay re-creating me…</p>

<p>looking for an awesome closing statement…</p>

<p>i shall bump this thread</p>