<p>hello i will be applying to the ucs this fall, my gpa and sat scores are mediocre, i will be applying to ucr ucsc uci...any help u can give me on this essay will be greatly appreciated thank you!~</p>
<p>question #2 Tell us about a talent, experience, contributions or personal quality that you will bring to the university of california.</p>
<pre><code>The dark red Toyota violently swerved to the right, nearly colliding with several cars, and made an abrupt exit. The driver parked the car and dashed out. His face was flushed red and his eyes were filled with tears. He leaned over the shrubbery, hands at his waist. Meanwhile, I sat in the drivers seat with a look of horror on my face, realizing that we had just narrowly escaped death. No, we did not almost die that day because of some tragic or unfortunate news I had shared with that man but, because as people often put it, I was too damned funny.
By no means, am I the class clown performing shameless acts to get a laugh or two. Rather that tall, nerdy kid that the girls try to avoid (god Im a loser.) Im that kid in class that can make the teacher keel over in laughter with an oral presentation. Im that kid that gets chosen first for taboo just for the funny clues I give. Finally, Im that kid that finds humor in any situation, and just doesnt know when to be serious.
Someday, I will grow up and enter the harsh working world. Im bound to change as the stress of the real life takes its toll on me. Be this as it may, I vow never to stop making people laugh, this is who I am.
<p>it has 233 words..do u think itll be ok?? ya its pretty crappy but its rough draft...THANK YOU FOR READING!!!</p>