Anybody willing to edit my long essay?

soccerfanatic · October 30, 2005, 2:22pm

I need to cut out 80 chars, so let me know if there’s a useless sentence. It’s also a very rough draft.

goldenslumber · October 30, 2005, 3:21pm

Sure, PM it. I’d be glad to help. :)

TKnows · October 30, 2005, 4:08pm

haha, procrastinators unite! i’ll read it and tell u what I like and hate about it too

Goldfish · October 30, 2005, 5:03pm

I’ll be glad to read it too, though I’m surprised that you have to cut anything at all :)

a_reliable_source · October 30, 2005, 9:00pm

i’ll edit if you want, send me a pm

dere · October 30, 2005, 9:59pm

hey, i’ll help edit.