anyone care to read my essay??

<p>i need some suggestions on my commonapp essay. i wrote about the organization i started for children adopted from china. anyone care to read??</p>

<p>yaa sure post it on here n I can have a look at it for ya.</p>

<p>id recommend you PM it to people, dont post it publicly. And wrong forums btw.</p>

<p>sorry…is there a college essays forum??</p>

<p>hmm i dont know. is there?</p>