anyone care to read my essay??

<p>i need some suggestions on my commonapp essay, and people on the princeton thread seem to be very happy to help read essays. i wrote about the organization i started for children adopted from china. anyone care to read??</p>

<p>Sure, I would be happy to help. Send it over. :)</p>

<p>sure, just pm me :)</p>

<p>I’d be willing to read it as well.</p>

<p>i’ll critique it</p>