Anyone care to read my UC essay? I'd really appreciate it.

College Essays
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<p>I wrote the second prompt for the UC essay, and need some feedback! If you’d be willing, just PM me.</p>

<p>I’m applying to the following UCs:

  1. UC Berkeley
  2. UCLA
  3. UC Santa Cruz
  4. UC Davis
  5. UC San Diego
  6. UC Santa Barbara</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>Sure, send it over. :]</p>

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<p><a href="mailto:confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com">confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com</a>
people say i give good and honest feedback.
send it on over.</p>

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<p>I’m a first year at Cal. I’d be happy to take a look.</p>

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<p>I’m willing to take a look at your essay. Just PM me. :)</p>

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<p>Sure I’ll read it. PM me :)</p>

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<p>I’ll check it out</p>

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<p>I will look over it, pm me if you would like.</p>

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<p>sure, PM your essay to me and I will take a look at it!</p>

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<p>I can read it if you need anymore readers.</p>

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<p>Bump! Anymore readers would be much appreciated!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it</p>

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<p>sure! I’d love to edit your essay. I finished both of the essays already but I need more revising. Wanna exchange essays? :P</p>

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<p><a href="mailto:biggumt@yahoo.com">biggumt@yahoo.com</a> would be glad to read it.</p>

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<p>I’d be glad to a look and give you feedback. PM me!
Btw, I’ve already submitted my UC apps.</p>