Anyone feel like destroying my common app essay

[consanguineous]

<p>Feel free to be as brutal as possible, I’d really appreciate it! I’ll pm the essay, as long as you appear credible and such. </p>

[nycutie786]

<p>Pm me</p>

[HvePassion]

<p>I’ll help!</p>

[consanguineous]

<p>bump</p>

[nolasola]

<p>I’ll help as well</p>

[nickxx]

<p>I can help if you’d like</p>

[yikesyikesyikes]

<p>If you want a pair of young eyes to take a look, PM me :).</p>