Anyone mind reading my Common App essay? Please help!

<p>I am torn between two essays that I have written for the common app. One is a 500 word essay for the diversity question and the other is a 560 word essay that could work for topic of your choice of influential question.</p>

<p>I would LOVE it if someone would read them and tell me which they think would be the best to use. </p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>Anyone? I don't need grammatical/advice on the essay itself, just which one is better.</p>

<p>PM me, I'd be glad to help, but I'm no expert.</p>

<p>I'll read it</p>