<p>I wrote two, but I want feedback on only one. It was about what <em>I</em> wanted to write about. The other was a sappy story I was advised to write that tries to play on the heartstrings of the essay reader, but has lifeless prose IMO.</p>
<p>I had an easier time writing one of the two.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>Also, I was told not to write the second essay because of its “risky” content. </p>
<p>I am happy to read and give feedback. Are you looking for grammar and spelling proofread or for advice on the “risk” aspect?</p>
<p>I’m also down to read if you still need someone to.</p>
<p>Bump. Thanks guys!</p>
<p>@Xenmas021 If you still need an extra pair of eyes, I’d be more than willing to take a look. </p>