Anyone up for a final read before I submit essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hoping to get a few more opinions before I submit :slight_smile: Please be harsh!</p>

<p>I’m worried its a little on the short side…and a little cheesy. I need the essay to be very good for my situation</p>

<p>thanks!</p>

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<p>send it to e, i open to readin good work x</p>

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<p>uggh, typos. im open to reading good work. x</p>

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<p>oh and its about ~550 words</p>

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<p>Hey, I’ll be willing to read your essay and give some comments.</p>

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<p>bu m p in g</p>