<p>If anyone wants to check out my outline, please write your email so that I can send it to you. </p>
<p>Please give me feedback! Should I add different experiences in my life or more details? Criticisms? Should I alter my outline of the essay? Can I get help on forming my introductory sentence or any other topic sentences?</p>
<p>Thanks in advance guys!</p>
<p>anyone wanna help me?</p>
<p>i can help you check it out.</p>
<p>I’ve already written mine so I’d be glad to critique yours.</p>
<p>email me its <a href="mailto:kevintangeous@yahoo.com">kevintangeous@yahoo.com</a></p>
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<p>anyone else wanna help?</p>
<p>ill take a look. pm me</p>