Anyone want to critique my common app + supplement essays?

College Essays
1

<p>I’d really appreciate some last minute feedback on my CA essays. Thanks!</p>

2

<p>Sure. Do you have IM? It’s easier for me.</p>

3

<p>I’ll add you on MSN if you want.</p>

4

<p>Add me. Stupid 10 char limit.</p>

5

<p>I’ll read. PM it to me.</p>