Anyone Want to Edit My Essay for Yale and Rice

<p>I’d be glad to give you some constructive feedback if u pm to me</p>

<p>I would love to read it and comment if you like. PM me.</p>

<p>PM it to me too.I wanna read it.Of course,I will comment too.</p>

<p>i’ll read it =)</p>

<p>sure PM it over</p>

<p>Can’t apply to those schools anyway :)</p>