Anyone Want to Edit My Essay for Yale and Rice

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys, </p>

<p>Title says it all. My essay is about how Charles Darwin inspired me = D, just post here if you want to read/edit it. I’d REALLY appreciate the help cuz right now its just my first draft!</p>

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<p>PM me, I will be glad to read it and edit it (include the prompt too)</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it</p>

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<p>send it here</p>

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<p>PM with prompt/title.</p>

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<p>PM it to meee</p>

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<p>PM me…I’ll help.</p>

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<p>cool, u can pm it over.</p>

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<p>I can give some good feedback if you wish. Just PM me :)</p>

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<p>sure just pm</p>

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<p>i want to read…sounds interesting</p>

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<p>sure. pm it over.</p>

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<p>i would volunteer to read it. i’m a 2014er but i’ve finished most of my essays for colleges and won’t be applying to rice/yale. [don’t have the best GPA, really, to be honest].</p>

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<p>PM it over!</p>

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<p>sure I will take a look. PM it over</p>

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<p>PM me please.</p>

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<p>Hey guys, </p>

<p>I just PMed my essay to a couple of people and they both think that my essay is too focused on Darwin (and not enough on me). So, I will have to make some adjustments before I send it to the rest of you guys. Thanks so much and sorry about the delay!</p>

<p>Best Regards,
Robbie</p>

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<p>yes please!</p>

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<p>i’d love to read it. pm me :)</p>

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<p>I have nothing else better to do. pm</p>