Anyone want to read my common app essay?

<p>I finished my common app essay recently, and it would be great if I could get some input from adults instead of HS kids on this site. Whoever wants to read it and offer some feedback, post below and I'll PM it to you. Thanks!!!</p>

<p>I'll give it a read. You promise not to be offended by any comments I might make.</p>

<p>Thanks! Anyone else?</p>