<p>I would really appreciate any criticism you an give me. Thanks!</p>
<p>I’ll help read it! ^^</p>
<p>sounds interesting. sure i’d be glad to critique it (:</p>
<p>I’ll definitely give it a look.</p>
<p>If you’d like my input, just pm me! Sounds interesting!</p>
<p>youve sparked my curiosity, ill take a look at it. pm.</p>