anyone wants to critique my essay? I'll appreciate it

<p>my ’ the ohio state university ’ essay : ) anyone wants to read except the class of 2014 ?</p>

<p>I wouldn’t mind reading it. </p>

<p>BTW this is unrelated to your essay but do you live in Ohio? A bunch of my brother’s friends are going there and they live a couple hundred miles away. I don’t understand why they’d want to go to a state university that’s not in our state.</p>

<p>oh i see~ no, i don’t reside in ohio :slight_smile: i’m an int student.</p>

<p>maybe that’s because the ohio state is somehow one of the top 20 public schools in the country.</p>

<p>hey you can PM or email it to me i’ll gladly read it over for you :)</p>