Anyone willing to Read my Common App Essay?

<p>Its a bit lengthy (747 words), so I need help cutting it down. I think I've got the topic correct, and expressed what I want to say about it. Any takers?</p>

<p>I can give it a look. Feel free to PM/email.</p>

<p>Sure, just PM it. Cutting it down is definitely the hardest part.</p>