Anyone willing to read my Common App transfer essay?

<p>Hey, everyone. I'd like someone to go over my Common App transfer essay. I finished writing it yesterday and I'm not sure how good it is. I felt satisfied after writing it but maybe someone from a neutral point of view would have some good suggestions on how to improve it. Anyone here willing to go over it? :)</p>


I have two things due tomorrow (an encyclopedia article and a conference proposal), but I could give it a quick look-over on Sunday.</p>

<p>Thanks, hayva!</p>

<p>Send me ! And I will help you through ********* !</p>

<p>If you still want to have me look at it, message me.</p>

<p>(I didn´t logon yesterday.)</p>

<p>i'd love to take a look PM me</p>

<p>Please PM me if you want.</p>

<p>I've already submitted my application. Thanks to everyone who offered to help!</p>