anyone willing to read my essay?? its not too long

College Essays
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<p>soo i just wrote my essay and there is something missing. i just cant put my finger on it. so please just take a glance at my essay and give me some advice. thankyou!!!</p>

<p>ill pm you</p>

<p>essay topic:
How has your family history, culture, or environment influenced who you are?</p>

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<p>anybody???</p>

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<p>Sure… PM it!</p>

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<p>im new at this but im an excellent writer so i’ll read it! PM me</p>

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<p>im making a few revisons right now but im almost done and ill pm you. thanks!</p>