Anyone willing to read my response to PlayDoh/Plato prompt?

<p>I'd like some comments and criticism on what I have so far. Reply to this thread and I'll PM you the google doc link. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>Send it to me.</p>

<p>i'll take a look and try to help edit :D</p>

<p>oh... edit:</p>

<p>I was also accepted early and did prompt #4</p>

<p>I was accepted early, and though I did the reverse psychology prompt I would be happy to read it.</p>

<p>I'd like to read it. Thanks!</p>

<p>I'd like to read and I promise to give you my comments.</p>

<p>I'll readd it!</p>

<p>I would be willing to critique!</p>

<p>out of the 6 people I PM'd the essay to, only 1 responded....:c</p>

<p>I'll read and comment.</p>

<p>I'll read. Ive never done a critique before so I might bot be too good. Btw, i got accepted and i also did the plato essay</p>

<p>I'll read it too!</p>

<p>I will also read it and give feedback :)</p>

<p>I'd be willing to read it and give some feedback.</p>

<p>I can look at it and give you feedback if you'd like!</p>

<p>I'd be happy to take a look. I didn't do the same prompt as you but I was accepted EA this year.</p>

<p>I would love to read and help you with your essay. I got accepted EA last week and received a Christmas card w/ a reference to my essay!...Though I'm sure all the other accepted kids did too..lol...just lemme think I'm special</p>

<p>I'd be happy to. I was accepted EA, if that means anything...</p>

<p>Sent from my SPH-D710 using CC App</p>

<p>@emmele: </p>

<p>Well I didn't get a friendly Christmas card like that so you might be more special than you think :P</p>

<p>@CyoungX
Where are you from? You might get yours in a couple of days. I live like 20 minutes away. Maybe they figure I'll need extra coaxing to go to school that close to home...lol..they are probably right..</p>