Anyone willing to read my why Duke essay???

Could Current Duke students please critique my essay.
I'd really appreciate it.
Thanks a lot.</p>


<p>Bump please!</p>

<p>I don't go to Duke, but I'll look at it if you want!</p>

<p>not a duke student either (unfortunately..) but I know a lot about the school. I can take a look!</p>

<p>I'll do it! Avoiding grad school apps;) PM me. 2012'er</p>

<p>I'll read it (not Duke) though</p>