<p>This is my commonapp essay for RD. Could you post/pm if you want to edit?
Thanks a lot</p>
<p>I’ll take a peak, give some feedback!</p>
<p>peek! Please! Be sure to carefully proofread your essays for errors like that.</p>
<p>I would be willing to. Could you help me with mine too? :)</p>
<p>I’d love to read and provide my comments. PM me. </p>
<p>Though I am not an expert so its your wish if you want to send it or not! But you will get an honest suggestion</p>
<p>@BrownParent–maybe it’s a Common App essay about mountaineering?</p>