Application Essay

<p>Hi, I working on the common app essay and I doing "Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international conern and its importance to you". I had a quick idea and made a rough draft of the essay but I think its too simple compared to some of the other application essays I've read. Could someone read my rough draft or help me with my idea. I'll pm them, thanks a lot.</p>

<p>I'll read it =) PM me.</p>

<p>^ sent it =)</p>