Are my essays too generic?

College Essays
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<p>would anyone like to read two of my MIT essays? Each is 250 words. I really want to make my essays original, so any criticism is appreciated!</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look at them</p>

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<p>PM me if you need more opinions.</p>

4

<p>of course. pm them over.</p>

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<p>PM me. And be wary of whartonite1.</p>

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<p>PM me if you need help. Watch out for whartonite1… he has only 1 post.</p>

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<p>^
Yes, i did take note of that.</p>

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<p>hey, if you need another opinion, pm it to me!</p>

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<p>PM me. I’ll give it a read.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>I’ll give you an honest critique. PM it me if you still need readers</p>