At your service, a grammar and diction Nazi

College Essays
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<p>HOW I CAN HELP YOU:
I am a college freshman, and as the title explains, I can help you tremendously with your grammar and word choice. Additionally, I can assist you, but not as much, with structural, heuristic and narrative improvements. </p>

<p>WHY I AM DOING THIS:
I am doing this because I like reading and editing essays. I will not plagiarize your essays. Just so you know, I hope to transfer to Penn. </p>

<p>TO GET MY HELP:
PM me your essay, and I will reply within 1 day.
I merely request that, if you feel I have helped you with your essay, then you post an acknowledgement on this thread to let others know.</p>

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<p>Sure–I’ll send you my Amherst essay.</p>

<p>By the way, what college are you at now?</p>

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<p>Muse your help would be greatly appreciated. I sent it to you in three parts, I know it’s a lot, but you don’t know what it means to me.</p>

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<p>grammar and diction? exactly what i need for some “soft” essays</p>

<p>pmed</p>

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<p>Just got mine back. Thanks muse! It sounds much stronger.</p>

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<p>i just PMed mine!</p>

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<p>Excellent and quick feedback. Really helped in shortening my essay and making it more clear. I would recommend sending my essays to any member in need of essay critique.</p>

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<p>Pm’ing mine straight over.</p>

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<p>PMing mine over, thank you so much!</p>

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<p>I’m pm’ing my short essay over, yes. Please reply fast fast fast!!</p>

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<p>I really wish this was posted like 2 weeks ago. -_-</p>

<p>Sent in almost everything already. I’ll send in a “Why Duke” and “Why Northwestern” asap though.</p>

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<p>PM’ed my EC Elaboration and Main Essay. Thank you very much for your help :)</p>

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<p>I just woke up and saw all of my essays edited. Muse is great. I really appreciate this service you are providing. If you don’t mind I’ll send you the Why Business ? essay for Georgetown in a few days!</p>

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<p>If you would, please read my short answer quickly, thank you! :)</p>

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<p>thanks so much muse! you are awesome</p>

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<p>Thanks muse! Definitely helpful with picky grammar points and clarity.</p>

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<p>Thanks a bunch muse, I appreciate the help.</p>

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<p>Wow really nice job. You cut my word count by about 40 and really added meaning, thanks.</p>

<p>Did you forget the other essays I sent you? I would love to hear you comment on those as well.</p>

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<p>I’m sending my personal statement right now :)</p>

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<p>PM’ed you. Thanks!</p>