<p>Mine is much more in line with the first, because that was what I was going for. But I wrote about the overall friendly, fun-loving and enthusiastic spirit. Is this ok? </p>
<p>To be completely honest my impression of yale was people who enjoy each other, have fun, and love eachother, whereas in other schools it was annoyingly competitive. This loving, friendly attitude was very important to me. I talked about the enthusiastic and friendly spirit (both in and out of athletic competitions) to explain why I would fit in with yale students as someone who loves sports.</p>
<p>I guess if this is out of line, a large part of my impression of yale that really distinguished it for me as the right school may be out of line. So is what I wrote accurate?</p>