Attention: Supplement assistance

Applying to College
1

<p>Supplement question: What influenced you to apply to Cornell, and why do you believe it might be a good college choice for you?</p>

<p>My counter: After an absurdly successful, straight A, perfection, perfectisto!, semester at a respected, accredited, alleged Liberal Arts college, I can confidently say, with zest, and no pretentiousity, that I can, without a doubt, dominate your curriculum. </p>

<p>Should I expound upon my accomplishments? Do I come off too benign?</p>

2

<p>I’m sure you could dominate the curriculum at many places. However, what could Cornell, and only Cornell, do for you? Think about it. Make it Cornell-specific.</p>

3

<p>If Cornell’s curriculum is even easier than where you currently are at, why even transfer? It seems like your current education is just fine.</p>

4

<p>Perhaps you don’t mean to sound pretentious, but I see nothing but pretentiousness. Humble it down a bit.</p>