I was rejected by Raisbeck Aviation High School, and I am trying again to get in. I got rejected because they said I did not cite evidence on how my experiences and interests in Aviation connect to their context in learning. The problem is, I did cite that evidence. I know myself that I rushed and wrote a ■■■■■■ essay, but I know I met all the criteria on the prompt. So it was another way of saying that my grades weren’t that great. I’m hoping to get a 4.0 my freshman year at my resident school to impress them, but I also need a better essay, that’s why I’m working on it this summer. I don’t know what experience I should write about, or the style of the essay.
The application and prompt are in the Pdf link below.
http://www.highlineschools.org/cms/lib07/WA01919413/Centricity/Domain/30/2015-RAHS-APPLICATION-PDF-VERSION.pdf